
No.5 the spacing in my contents page on the preliminary task is poor. There is a block of writing which isnt attractive to look at. Looking at my contents page in Ministry there's a lot more going on and the page is very eye catching.
No.6 the competition in Ministry is something i didn't think of using in the school maagzine. it obviously attracts the audience and is just one of many things that makes the contents page look more interesting.
No.7 The titles for the articles in the contents page in Ministry have a larger bold green writing which is a main word or two that sums up the story. then after there are a few words that give a little bit more. I think this was a better idea that just writing the page number and an article title as it gives the reader a little bit more information on what they're reading.
No.8 Clubber of the month this is a completely new idea that i thought of to put in the magazine. It's definately a big progression from the preliminary task as i haven't just used what you'd expect to see on the contents page (pictures and writing). there is something which the consumers can get involved in and is yet another attraction for the target audience to buy the magazine.

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